That dead bastard. ~23 pages. I submitted a draft w/o those touches (and a string of other errata) if my editor wants to look over the completed rewrites. I’d call this another beta version, but a much improved one. If I had those chapters done (maybe tomorrow) I’d call it a Release Candidate.
But they’re not, and I’m tired. What I wouldn’t do for Lexis-Nexis access. I can’t believe how much money they want for that thing. Dammit.