A much-revised Cubs of Democracy, in about two weeks. Note but nothing I could go back and re-write on, I think (they weren’t grabbed). I’m starting to wonder if it’s really a good thing to get quick turnarounds, even if they’re with notes.

Sigh. Little depressing: I can see where it’s not a thrill-a-minute ride, where the setting/characters/etc are more interesting than the basic confrontation, which is the problem, but I’m rather fond of it.

Back to working on Archipelago then, in the hopes that larger central confrontation can sell itself.

Or, possibly, a guide to deciphering rejection notes. :p

Or, maybe, I should chill out, go to Clarion West, hopefully get better, and see what I want to do.